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Friday, 18 May 2018

The Wolf is INNOCENT

In class we read the true story of the 3 little pigs. This made me think that the wolf was innocent of his crimes. We wrote persuasive writing to convince our readers of our opinion... here is my story.


Introduction: This will introduce your topic and have a little bit of information about why you believe the wolf is innocent. Perhaps you could talk a little bit about his personality and describe how you think he might act. If he is innocent he might be a nice wolf!
The wolf is definitely innocent. He is a predator and they eat meat so he can’t be blamed for his crimes. It is in his nature!
First argument: Think of a strong argument about why the wolf is innocent. Introduce it here. Remember to expand on your idea and add evidence from the text.

He is Innocent . Wolves are predators. People eat Bacon . Wolves eat animals. This shows the wolf is innocent!
Second argument: What is another strong argument? Begin this paragraph with connecting words such as- “another reason, secondly, also” Remember to use evidence from the text.
The wolf was hungry and didn’t have breakfast.  He didn’t kill a person so he doesn’t need to go in jail.  He killed a pig, what is wrong with that? Butchers do that too. The wolf needed to sneeze, there is no way he is not innocent! The wolf is definitely innocent and thoughtful because if he went to the mall he would have gotten sick.


Third argument: This is the last paragraph to use information to try and convince your audience, make it a strong point!
The wolf was making a cake for his grandma for a birthday present. The bunny was the cake. He is innocent because wolves are meat eaters. His grandma is a wolf which means she wants a meat cake. You can’t blame him for wanting a bunny in the cake.


Conclusion: Sum up your argument. Make it persuasive “Without a doubt, as you can see, the wolf is definitely innocent because…”
The wolf is clearly not guilty he thought the pig was dead so even if the pig was alive then it was on accident so he shouldn’t go to jail for that. There is no way the wolf is guilty. He is the brother of the Wolf in Little Red Riding Hood and HE is the bad one. The 3 little pigs wolf is GOOD.

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